Pringlescan3580

For years I've had an idea for an anime. Never have been able to write it, but always had it in my head. So I finally put it on paper. Just completed the first volume. I hope once I get enough of it written to send it into a few competitions to hopefully one day get published.

Story

Jack Fuda an american who has moved to Japan when his mother remarried has dreams when he sleeps like any other person. His dreams tend to be the same every night. He's the hero who fights and wins at the end. On the first day of school he notices something strange when a new transfer student happens to look exactly like the girl in his dreams.

Snippets

This is from Volume 1. Part of a fight scene.

Rallis: "Short range soldiers, step up and defend the line."

Narrator: Taking more damage, Jack held his ground against the ranged soldiers. He saw the advancing short range group. He knew things were going to get worse and Rose needed to get away.

Jack charged into the group of incoming soldiers. Hacking, slashing, punching and kikcing his way around. After taking considerable loses, Rallis puled back his first groups and put forth his destruction squad. Jack went back to Rose to strengthen the barrier he had put up.

Rose: "Please stop this, you can't take much more."

Jack: " I'l lbe fine, when I say run you run."

Rose: "Why........?"

Narrator: Jack boosted the barrier and readied himself for what was coming.

Rallis: "Ready beam drop!"

"Fire when ready, kill Jack not the girl!"

Narrator: Once ready the destruction squad unleashed there power. Hundered of energy morters flew towards Jack and Rose. Jack boosted the barrier over Rose. He turned around and gave her a smile.

Jack: "RUN!!!"

Narrator: Rose head that and began to run. She stopped after a short distance and looked back. She saw Jack with his hand raised towards the soldiers. A blue flame was started to form. It wasn't very big as Jack had lost power due to battle damage and putting up the barrier to protect Rose. Rose hesitated, then ran back to Jack. She put her hands and head on his back crying.

Jack: "Why aren't you gone!?!"

Rose: "Shh, please take this"

Narrator: With that Rose closed her eyes and concentrated on Jack. He could feel a soothing air around him. He felt stronger. He boosted the barrier for both of them. The blue flame grew in size. When he was ready he aimed at the destruction squad and let out a roar and sent his attack towards the soldiers.

There a little taste of things to come. It's rough so please be gentle.

Updates
3/1/12 - Started writing first volume.
3/23/12 - Finished first volume.
4/21/12 - Started writing second volume.
4/25/12 - Released a snippet of volume 1
7/30/12 - Finished Proof reading and editing 1st Volume
8/21/12 - 1st Volume complete.