wee_kat15296

Well done, well said, now on with it Mate!

It's nice. :)

Your a proper poet my friend, get down to publishers and give them a looksee. :)

If I am the narrator, I would still go for her if I really like her, no matter what happens

That man to me seems equal to the gods,
the man who sits opposite you
and close by listens
to your sweet voice
your enticing laughter—
that indeed has stirred up the heart in my breast.
For whenever I look at you even briefly
I can no longer say a single thing,
but my tongue is frozen in silence;
instantly a delicate flame runs beneath my skin;
with my eyes I see nothing;
my ears make a whirring noise.
A cold sweat covers me,
trembling seizes my body,
and I am greener than grass.
Lacking but little of death do I seem.
- Sappho

this definitely will do, keep it up!

nice, you have a talent for writing poetry

It rhymes.

hmm..nice !
I like poems..!!