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03 July 2012, 23:26 (10 months ago)
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If the green in your hand becames the red of my lips could the ice melt could the winter go? You set your dark curly head in my lap a soft whisper of a song that escapes from your lips turns the blue, and the white, and the brown an only shape, an only flower, an only leaf a unique whisper in two equal drops of water When we set apart will this trees remember the song that softly flown from your lips? will the water remember the shape of our hands together will the willow remember the embrace? the soft kiss upon my sholder... will we? Though this is not my work, it is one of my favorite poems.
ANNABEL LEE Author: Edgar Allan Poe It was many and many a year ago, In a kingdom by the sea, That a maiden there lived whom you may know By the name of Annabel Lee; And this maiden she lived with no other thought Than to love and be loved by me. I was a child and she was a child, In this kingdom by the sea; But we loved with a love that was more than love - I and my Annabel Lee; With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven Coveted her and me. And this was the reason that, long ago, In this kingdom by the sea, A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling My beautiful Annabel Lee; So that her highborn kinsman came And bore her away from me, To shut her up in a sepulcher In this kingdom by the sea. The angels, not half so happy in heaven, Went envying her and me Yes! that was the reason (as all men know, In this kingdom by the sea) That the wind came out of the cloud by night, Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee. But our love was stronger by far than the love Of those who were older than we Of many far wiser than we And neither the angels in heaven above, Nor the demons down under the sea, Can ever dissever my soul from the soul Of the beautiful Annabel Lee. For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams Of the beautiful Annabel Lee; And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes Of the beautiful Annabel Lee; And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side Of my darling, my darling, my life and my bride, In the sepulcher there by the sea, In her tomb by the sounding sea. Early Stages
His pale soft blue eyes Looked at me from across the room Dressed in black, purely, simply Gives a color to desire Atraction is a merry-go-round that while spining silences everyone else around anything else around like a blur in the mind of a painter a master piece in formation right there when creation is perfection Just a spining wheel of light Where warm and cold stay together where fire and ice made a planet of their own Loving someone in it's early stages it's like the next edition of your all time favorite comic book just coming out Can't wait to touch it Grab it Open it, know everything about it and if you do when you do it's like a vortex rapidly eat you out travel your mind and soul who cares to which galaxy His pale blue eyes the early beard veiling his skin the tip of my imaginary fingers wondering if the soft pink of his lips can kiss me like no other rose did Some visions of love can be seen thru the Gods eyes you can feel the breath of invencibility when all your body is beating like a mighty heart all the possibilities all the impossibilities all in that vortex when everything stoped I kissed the soft pink of his lips and his pale blues eyes were unbearably close ... it wasn't me it wasn't him ... if love is just imagination how can it hurt just the same? Last edited by magicpotions1211, 10 months ago magicpotions1211
Early Stages
His pale soft blue eyes Looked at me from across the room Dressed in black, purely, simply Gives a color to desire Atraction is a merry-go-round that while spining silences everyone else around anything else around like a blur in the mind of a painter a master piece in formation right there when creation is perfection Just a spining wheel of light Where warm and cold stay together where fire and ice made a planet of their own Loving someone in it's early stages it's like the next edition of your all time favorite comic book just coming out Can't wait to touch it Grab it Open it, know everything about it and if you do when you do it's like a vortex rapidly eat you out travel your mind and soul who cares to which galaxy His pale blue eyes the early beard veiling his skin the tip of my imaginary fingers wondering if the soft pink of his lips can kiss me like no other rose did Some visions of love can be seen thru the Gods eyes you can feel the breath of invencibility when all your body is beating like a mighty heart all the possibilities all the impossibilities all in that vortex when everything stoped I kissed the soft pink of his lips and his pale blues eyes were unbearably close ... it wasn't me it wasn't him ... if love is just imagination how can it hurt just the same? Wow, stunning!
I love your use of desciptive words in this poem. They really made my imagination come to life. I can't wait to read more of your work. ![]() |





